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My Idea for Spiderman 4

Thu Jan 29, 2009, 3:32 AM
To date we've seen the Green Goblin (1 & 2), Doctor Octopus, Sandman & Venom. So you may be asking yourself 'who's left?' Additionally we don' know if Kirsten Dunst is coming back yet either, so who might the tumultuous love interest be. Now I have a few ideas. Take them as you will. And I'm not even going to go into casting... I'll let other people do that. (I apologize now for any spelling or grammatical errors. I typed this up on the fly)

SPIDERMAN 4

We start with Spiderman on patrol on a summer evening. He is lamenting that even though he and MJ are working things out fine (and maybe slowly) she is away from the city on a modeling gig, since theater didn't work out so well. In the shadows he sees a cat burglar enter a high rise.

*Flash Inside* curves and leather are all you see as this burglar makes her way to a hidden safe. After emptying said safe of it's contents you pull back the camera angle to see the Black Cat all sexy against the back drop of the big city. As she makes her way back out you see Spidey hanging above the now open window. A chase ensues with the regular witty banter but with Peter eventually losing the trail tripping up himself somehow, based on Black Cat's 'bad luck' ability.

Next Day ESU Campus Pete shows up for class only to find a note saying Dr. Connors has cut class. Cut scene to Dr. Connors in a lab working with not only lizard DNA but the piece of Symbiote that he received from Peter in Spiderman 3. For a short scene you seeing science and experiments as it looks like this new serum has the possibility to regrow human tissue. Peter comes in and after a short discussion is ushered out. Dr. Connors than injects himself with the serum. After a harsh reaction he passes out.

Peter is next scene at the Daily Bugle. Now that he has a regular job JJ wants him to attending a charity gala and take pictures. The usual banter about Spiderman ensues between JJ, Robbie, and Peter.

Peter is at the gala taking pictures of all the social lites and takes a picture of a beautiful blonde, Felicia Hardy. he accidentally bumps into her and small talk is made. He explains he could never understand how the rich live like this and she makes offhanded remarks, that maybe they are living to well in a very 'Robin Hood' fashion. His spider sense tingles but nothing happens, but Peter gets overly nervous. Felicia dissapears int the crowd.

Night in the city. You see someone come running out of an alley into a crowd of people. He's babbling scared, and not quite coherent. Just as someone starts to calm this guy down, the Lizard bursts out into the street. He starts attacking people and the cops start shooting scaring him back into the alleyways.

Spiderman is outside the building where the charity event was taking place, unable to let the weird feeling go. He sees the Black Cat zip down on a line, he starts to follow her, again the banter of how nice they could play together ensues, heavy flirting in costume. Just as he's about to apprehend her he hears the gunshots from around the way.

As he turns back she has disappeared, he jets to the sound of gunfire. He sees the police starting to gather looking in the alley. He swings around and finds the Lizard on a roof top. On big slashy battle later and Spidey ends up getting cut and losing the Lizard as well.

Cut Scene a hunting lodge somewhere. A bunch of hunter are all gathered around one very distinct looking gentleman. One of the hunter comments on the exceptional kill the other hunter has had (probably the best time to insert a Bruce Campbell appearance) using only a knife. When on the television at the bar a news report appears about a giant lizard creature roaming the streets of New York with some lousy footage shot from a cell phone camera. The exceptional hunter stands up and leaves abruptly when asked where he's going he simply states 'New York' in his thick accent. One of the other hunter calls after him something like "You can't be serious. Kraven. Kraven, are you serious?!"

Insert obligatory scene with Aunt May here, talk about the distant MJ and how she hasn't called.

Back at the Bugle Peter is handing over pictures of the Lizard, JJ tries to pin recent crime spree on Spiderman and the Lizard. Obligartoey argument between Robbie and JJ. As Peter heads out Betty give him his check. they laugh at how nice it is for him to finally be on staff. (Betty's pretty hehe) Peter than realizes he's late for class.

Back at ESU Dr. Connors wakes, his new arm missing, returning once again to its amputated state. He begins again to tamper with his formula to eradicate the Lizard effect while still growing his arm back. Again Peter stops by to find out if he missed anything in class. Dr. Connors lashes out verbally at him kicking him out. His aggression clearly heightened. He continues to work on the formula eventually injecting himself again.

Spiderman on Patrol when suddenly he is joined by the Black Cat, this time hunting him.
She eludes to the fact that they could make a great team, be they heroes or villains. As her seduction starts to work they spot the Lizard. Together they are able to capture the Lizard and knock him out. Unconscious he returns to his human form. From a distant rooftop you see through a rifle scope view. Panning back we see Kraven the Hunter.

Spidey and Cat help Connors back to his lab, where he promises never to use the formula again. Afterward Cat and Spidey keep talking, but she makes it clear that she is only interested in Spiderman, and not the man beneath.

Obligatory scene with aunt May about what type of woman would want something but not the core beneath

Connors family picnic. Dr. Connors is reflecting on what it means to be a man, a father, a husband. For a moment he is alone and a stranger appears and talks to him about virility, insinuating often about physical strength using heavy arm movements. this lays the seeds of doubt in Connors mind. Kraven's work here is done.

Once again the Lizard is out on the street. Peter hears this on the police scanners and bolts out after him. As he gets there he finds the Lizard is actually already on the run. Kraven closes in on the chase after leading the Lizard into a trap. Once Caught Kraven emerges from the shadows. Spidey is furious and fights Kraven off, knocking him unconscious... or so it seems. rising from his psuedo slumber as Peter leave with the Lizard.

Pete rescues Connors, taking him back to the lab. As Peter he wakes up the good doctor and explains to him it about who he really is, not the image in his mind of having arms that matters. Doc Connors either destroys the data or locks it away permanently. (Possibly even sending it to his friend Dr Richards)

Pete back at Bugle, starts to look up Kraven's history. As he finds out more about Kraven and his amazing hunting ability, and the rumor of a "potion" which gives him super human abilities to complete these great hunts. As Peter looks up Kraven, Kraven is aquiring the bait for his next hunt... Here Kitty kitty...

As Peter gets back to his apartment he finds Kraven waiting for him. Kraven explains whats going to happen. Cat is in a 'safe' location, but it will only be safe for so long. Peter will be given her location at a random time, at which point the hunt begins. Peter is of course against it. At which point Kraven explains how easy is was to capture ms hardy (accidentally revealing her identity) and then explains how much he knows about Peter. He does this in a very threatening manor. He leaves chuckling.

Peter scours the city looking for Felicia, unable to find her. A day later at random a bike messenger delivers the first clue, and Peter takes off. Kraven on his heels. Each clue leads to another location. Battling Kraven along the way. Kraven drinking his "potion" several times along the way to compete.

A climatic battle ensues where Peter is finally at the whims of Kraven when his heart gives out from the strain of the fight and what the potion actually does to his body. But Kraven dies with a smile on his face having captured his ultimate hunt.

Peter rescues Felicia but ends up cutting his loses. He wants to be with someone who wants him for him, essentially Mary Jane. Parting shot is Peter at another family picnic with the Connors and aunt May.


So, what do you think?

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:iconbarquiel:
Pretty solid story you have their, tho I have to say it would work more as a cartoon than a movie. The spider movies have tendencies to throw out the more flamboyant villians and lots of them. Currently the only ones they have set up are Lizard and I think Electro (from the 1st movie). The villians that the crowds want/demand to see is Venom(again),Carnage,and I even heard of a few people who wanted a movie with spiderman fighting his final mutation(tho I thought this was only from the old cartoon,people say spiderman goes true spider in the comics to).

My thoughts tho are simple, I hope they do NOT make another spider film. They all sucked after the first one and even the first was lack luster to me. First Kristen is not an attractive woman and second the guy they have had playing spiderman has said he wouldn't put on the suit again.Maybe he has already been type casted and cant get any scripts in his door anymore to pay the bills.

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:iconbarquiel:
Oh forgot to mention in last post the next spiderman movie,if they do in fact make one, Should be simply Spiderman Vs Bruce.

BTW their is another Bruce movie out its called "I am Bruce"

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:iconturbulence1973:
Yeah, but Spiderman vs Bruce could only end one way...


Winner: Bruce!
:iconturbulence1973:
I thought of the whole Carnage idea, I did. But I rad somewhere that Toby had said yes to two more Spidey movies. And since the second Goblin didn't come around until the third movie I thought having a break in there between Venom and Carnage might play it up, especially since we just had Venom. I had of Electro or Rhino, but neither seem to lack the serious threat Kraven the Hunter has always posed. And even the idea of Silver Sable came into mind, especially since she had hired Sandman for a while. Again I think that might be better for a fifth movie, as another psuedo villian team up with Spidey (possibly) vs Carnage.

I have to disagree the Kirsten is an attractive woman, but I don't think she makes a good MJ. And I didn't particularly care for their choice of Gwen Stacey either. I'm hoping that they could do a better job with Black Cat/Felicia Hardy.

Thanks for actually reading through everything, I know this was long idea.
:iconbarquiel:
So true Bruce would win hands down, so much so that they would have to call it Bruce vs Spidey :D. I think if they were to do another movie they would have to bring back Venom because what they did to him pissed off so many fans. Tho personally I really hope they dont make another spidey movie.

Of course I read the whole post :D
When one is put up agaisnt a Wall of Text the best thing to do is to read it until it gets dumb at which point you attack it with a plus 3 sword of Ctrl-Alt-Del but your post was fun to read so I didnt have to pull out the sword.

As for movies I'm looking forward to seeing
Green Lantern - Currently green lit and script "ok'd"
Riddick 3 - From what I hear they are filming right now
Wolverine - I was looking forward to it until I saw the preview which made me think it was full of fail.

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:iconturbulence1973:
Well let me ruin your mood [link]

I'm glad the +3 sword stayed in its sheath. I'm still looking forward to the Wolverine movie, and the Magneto one they have planed next for the X-men Origins series. I really want to see Ryan Reynolds as Deadpool. Although I wish they would have gotten the original actor that played Sabertooth in X-men 1 (can we have a little continuity please?) or even Stryker. Although a third (or 4th depending on your view) Pitch Black? Do we really want to see Riddick as the overlord?
:iconnickdraw:
Wow, I like! Could be a very cool movie.

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